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雅思寫作中的典型錯誤

對于大多數國內雅思考生而言,5-6分是比較容易取得的分數。但是有部分同學連續考兩次雅思,作文均得5分。

 

他們百思不得其解:他們掌握了寫作的技巧,也有充分的論點論據,為什么6分這么難?其實他們的癥結在于語言基礎太不扎實,出現大量語言錯誤,通篇充斥著句子結構和用詞錯誤,甚至于第一段就出現“低級”語言錯誤十幾處,讓考官目不忍睹。

 

下面的改錯練習,希望考生認真分析其錯誤之處并找出其成因,不要停留在改錯的表層水平,應該挖掘其深層次的成因,以避免屢次犯同樣的“低級”錯誤。


  1.The invention of computers makes people live more comfortable and convenient.
  2.Don’t put hand in pocket.
  3.Many traffic accidents occurred is the result of careless.
  4.Last night was too cold.
  5.By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages, such as it is very clean and cheap.   

 6.Some people claim that fast food will instead of traditional food.
  7.Despite he is very diligent at study, he stills cannot pass the IELTS test.
  8.I finished homework and went out of dormitory for a drink.
  9.Though the Internet has many benefits, but it also has some drawbacks.
  10.If you are convenient, please give me a hand.
  11.In the past, the price of milk was so expensive that few people could hardly afford it.
  12.I forgot my watch at home.
  13.Smoking is harmful to your body.
  14.Under his help, we past the IELTS test.
  15.The two types of designs exist difference.
  16.The true fact is he never offers help to others.
  17.There are many people plan to study abroad.
  18.Keep pets are very popular among people live in big city.
  19.If let alone at home, many old people are very dangerous.
  20.The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease, however, they seldom do so.
  21.Today is very hot, I stay home.
  22.When talking to the interviewer, my heart was beating very fast.
  23.He gave the rose to the lovely lady that he had bought for his wife.
  24.Comparing with the performance of Linda, Kent’s performance is far from perfect.
  25.The big noise makes me can’t sleep well.
  26.My suggestion is more attention should be attached to the issue of youth drug abuse.
  27.The price of milk is more expensive than rice.
  28.The amount of bikes will decline in ten years.
  29.Smoking is harmful to one’s body. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman is pregnant.
  30.The reason why people choose to live in cities is because the city life is more convenient and colorful.
  31.People think develop space research will spend a huge number of money.
  32.Now people go abroad becomes very easy.
  33.Computer is a useful tool for student learn English.
  34.Raising pets are good for old people and child.
  35.Pet like dog and cat accompany them.
  36.Keep pet in big city is not allowed.
  37.There are many medical reports reveal that keeping pet can prevent heart disease and help patient to feel comfortably.
  38.Discuss about/complain about/enter into the room/contact with/
  39.Keep a pet would affect familial relationship.
  40.It arises a public debate as to whether we humans should carry out experiments on animals.
  41.Pursuit of fashion spends much money and waste much time.
  42.However, others people suggest that college students do the part-time job is quite beneficial.
  43.Young people live and study by themselves is of great significance to their future career.
  44.On the whole, computer games have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone has to admit that it’s disadvantages far overweight it’s advantages.
  45.I find myself difficult to work and study there due to my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.
  46.I am very difficult to write essays in English.
  47.When one is over 70 years old, he is very dangerous if left alone at home.
  48.I hope this letter would draw your attention and look into the case.
  49.Last year saw a rapidly raise in the volume of output.
  50.A small thief entered into my room and my room was stolen last night.
  51.I would like a single room to live and study.
  52.I am sorry for my abrupt departure that day, for I received a telephone that day asking me to return back home immediately.
  53.I and my sister like pets very much. Therefore we strongly against the ban on pet-raising.
  54.They maybe very busy so that they can not spare some time for their aged parents.
  55.The curve rose upward sharply in the past few days.
  56.After three days’ meeting, we drew a final conclusion that Tom is a dishonest man.


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